I think in our times it's a bit confusing for even a man to define what does it mean to be a "real man". And for me being a woman it's even harder to describe it and I can only guess. However, in my opinion, being a real man is, in fact, being your true self. Accepting your weaknesses and knowing your strengths. Of course, there are some popular believes that men should be self-confident, strong, successful, shouldn't be afraid to stand up for what they believe, yet I think that those characteristics don't only apply only for men, but also for women. To sum it up, I believe that the key to being a real man/ real human is just to be yourself and be kind to others.
Good idea. However, there are problems with the number of stressed syllables and syllables in general in most lines - lines 3 and 4 have too many (they should be short and have two stressed syllables only) and line 2 has too few. Line 5 needs tweaking too.
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