limerick

There was an old man called Bill
who didn't hesitate to kill
he spent all of his life in jail
because no one cared to pay his bail
and now he is the one who has time to chill.

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  1. Good idea. However, there are problems with the number of stressed syllables and syllables in general in most lines - lines 3 and 4 have too many (they should be short and have two stressed syllables only) and line 2 has too few. Line 5 needs tweaking too.

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